100 Word Challenge Week #13




One day a giraffe and his friend giraffe #2 were wandering on the African plains when they spotted a huge group of rhino's were coming at them. Then they looked to the right and there were tons of lions slowly creeping up on them. They would have ran away but they were exhausted from running away from wild dogs. So instead of running they started putting their legs onto a tree. It didn't snap so they put their whole body onto the tree, it still didn't break. When the rhino's and lions caught up to them, they rolled over laughing because they'd treed giraffe's.

Comments

  1. I like your story, it was very creative. You used very descriptive words which made it more interesting. Next time make sure your story flows a bit better.

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  2. I enjoy this story but is treed a real word i do not know but i like how you sort of explained it in a way of not explaining it at the same time

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  3. I liked your story and it was good.
    Good job on highliting the prompt.

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