Week #3 100 Word Challenge

Josh was hanging out with his friend when they decided to ride their bicycles. They were just going to ride around the school when they decided to ride their bikes up a hill and they were going really fast ...but it seemed to be going backwards... and then they started calling for help. They started trying to go faster but the wheels just kept on going in reverse. When they finally got to the bottom of the hill they just managed to stop it. They never rode their bicycles again.

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  1. HillcrestBlog3October 3, 2018 at 1:59 PM

    Hello Cole,
    You have not used the prompt properly; what is 'it'? Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. ride, decided, and hill. Keep on writing and learning.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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